Feedback on my pitch

Peer Evaluation

For our preparation for our game pitch we had to do mock pitches about a product, and we picked the Ipad air. we were put into teams of two (myself and Dan), after doing the presentations we were graded  by getting feedback of our peers about things we did well and things we could improve on. we had three different peers reviewing our pitch and these were their words on what we could have done better and what we did well.

Peer's Name: Debbie

P4: demonstrate a range of interpersonal skills?- achieved
P6:communicate technical information to a specified audience?- achieved
P5: consistent terminology used throughout?- achieved
It has to grounded in expert knowledge?- achieved

 Peer feedback
Muyiwa: stood in front of the power point presentation and read of the screen. But gave exceptional answers about why I should purchase the product.
Dan: Good knowledge about product but failed to explain why the product will be successful.
Overall good knowledge about the product and a bit more and good answers all round and well organised presentation.


Peer's Name: Sam

P4: demonstrate a range of interpersonal skills?- achieved
P6:communicate technical information to a specified audience?- achieved
P5: consistent terminology used throughout?- achieved
It has to grounded in expert knowledge?- Not achieved

Peer feedback
Be more original with your presentation.
Use notes or memorize lines.
Overall good knowledge and good insight about the product.

Peer's Name: Marcus
P4: demonstrate a range of interpersonal skills?- achieved
P6:communicate technical information to a specified audience?- achieved
P5: consistent terminology used throughout?- achieved
It has to grounded in expert knowledge?- achieved

Peer feedback
Dan: learn to read of power presentation less, either take notes or memorize lines.
Muyiwa: good answers equally use notes or memorize presentations
Overall Good presentation and good use of pictures

Overall we think our presentation went well with just a few negatives which we can easily improve on thanks to the peer reviews. we have taken the positives and the criticism on board for next time we want to do a pitch.